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The poems leaves me with a goofy feeling.
Elaborate on... prettty much everything.
"A grumpy chicken running"; the line is just so silly
I hope the final draft will be a lot longer, I'm interested in this chicken . .
Why is the chicken chasing the cactus?
Does the chicken catch the cactus? Does it get away? What happens?