Peer Review by 3AM Shenanigans (United States)

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Chicken of the Desert

By: E.s.L_:)


Unsheltered desert,
A grumpy chicken running,
After the cactus.


Peer Review

The poems leaves me with a goofy feeling.


Elaborate on... prettty much everything.


"A grumpy chicken running"; the line is just so silly


I hope the final draft will be a lot longer, I'm interested in this chicken . .


Reviewer Comments

Why is the chicken chasing the cactus?
Does the chicken catch the cactus? Does it get away? What happens?