Peer Review by 3AM Shenanigans (United States of America)()

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Chicken of the Desert

By: E.s.L_:)

Unsheltered desert,
A grumpy chicken running,
After the cactus.

Peer Review

The poems leaves me with a goofy feeling.

Elaborate on... prettty much everything.

"A grumpy chicken running"; the line is just so silly

I hope the final draft will be a lot longer, I'm interested in this chicken . .

Reviewer Comments

Why is the chicken chasing the cactus?
Does the chicken catch the cactus? Does it get away? What happens?