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He's so cute and dorky

By: MarrisaFuentez


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there is this boy I like and there is a problem my friend likes him too oh well i think she still does. he is cute and dorky that i cant help it. sometimes he doesnt talk to me and i kind of get upset. i dont chase him of course but i feel like he is mad at me and it kinda breaks my heart. he gives me butterflies everytime i talk to him i get so happy you know like a child on chritmas morning. I dont know how to stop this feeling but I don't think i dont want it to 


Peer Review

This is something that can happen to the best of us.


Nothing more is needed to tell that you really love him.


Reviewer Comments

Just tell him how you feel. Write him a note or send him a message.