Peer Review by Suri Purefoy (United States)

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the girl with skinny jeans and big glasses

By: Ellenrbnsn


PROMPT: Quartet

Her dreams reached the skies, yet she only scratched them in pencil behind the closed covers of worn notebooks. Waves danced at her glance, yet she only blamed the tides. Fire resided in her heart, yet she only avoided dark corners. Earthquakes shook inside her bones, yet she only ever lay in soft, white bedsheets. 


Peer Review

I think "Her dreams reached the skies, yet she only scratched them in pencil behind the closed covers of worn notebooks" really brought the character to life. And in the first line, too!


What are her dreams?


Reviewer Comments

Exquisite language, gorgeous descriptions, and a wonderful character!
This is a beautiful piece of artwork! The way you explained your character is amazing, and I love the words you used that really brought her to life!