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I think "Her dreams reached the skies, yet she only scratched them in pencil behind the closed covers of worn notebooks" really brought the character to life. And in the first line, too!
What are her dreams?
Exquisite language, gorgeous descriptions, and a wonderful character!
This is a beautiful piece of artwork! The way you explained your character is amazing, and I love the words you used that really brought her to life!