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Antiochian Orthodox Christian
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Message to Readers

I went from being extremely terrified (not to mention intimidated) of all poetry to writing 3 in one day. And guys, I did iambic tetrameter AND rhyming. Say whaaaaaaa?

I hope my mind does not explode...Goodnight

April 10, 2019


Yes I know I should go to bed,
but I am stuck here in my head.
The words are oozing out my ears;
my brain might burst of thoughts, I fear.
Ideas crack, like winter fire,
and dancing pictures I've acquired
throughout my day of country roads.
Unsure from where this mood has flowed,
and now my thoughts I have bestowed,
I hope my mind does not explode. 


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  • Juliana

    @Bill Bella Rex That's funny, cause that's exactly how it felt, haha, thanks!

    about 1 year ago
  • The Idiotic Philosopher

    The lines are really cool and it sort of seems to ebb from some unknown source, which makes it delightful to read!

    about 1 year ago
  • Juliana

    @JCWriter Thanks!

    about 1 year ago
  • JCWriter

    I like the flow of this one, and the line "Ideas crack, like winter fire" is great!

    about 1 year ago