HolisticDetective

United States of America

ASD and ADHD, obsessed with the Barenaked Ladies, Christian, blogs at justcaughtdaydreaming.wordpress.com

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The Poet's Lament

April 9, 2019

I should write a poem that's emotionally deep.
I stay up late trying instead of going to sleep.
I'm like ninety percent sure I have emotions and stuff,
But they won't go on the page; I'm finding this pretty tough.
With all the important topics in our world today,
You'd think I'd be able to write on one, some way.
See, why would anyone want to read a poem this bad?
My own lack of talent is making me pretty sad.
Getting frustrated at myself, now, I kick at my wall;
I'm wondering why I wrote any poem at all. 
Then I realize that, despite what I have said and thought,
This is an emotional poem that I have wrought. 
My feelings of frustration and sadness are written down,
They are the emotions in which this poem drowns.

 

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4 Comments
  • pencils.and.paper.roses

    Oh man, this is super relatable! I feel the same way super often.


    7 months ago
  • Quille

    Yes!!!!!! Emotion is so hard to really write sometimes; fantastic job on this :DD


    7 months ago
  • Juliana

    This is great! Also, I relate. I'm not very emotional, and so recently I've been trying to put more emotion into my writing. I think that you're right that sometimes the emotion is there, but it's hard to identify.


    7 months ago
  • Skyler Marks

    I really identify with this!!!! I sometimes find it difficult to write about something light when so much poetry is about really deep, important, stuff.


    7 months ago