Juliana

United States of America

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Antiochian Orthodox Christian
17
Music major
Former homeschooler
Voice teacher
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The world, the flesh, and father smith
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Message to Readers

I actually followed a form!.....that I made up. Baby steps. Its 3-3-4, and when I speak/read it, I stress every syllable.

Took Your Nainsooks

April 9, 2019

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Tick tock, dear,
can you hear
the rain come down?

It will beat
and repeat
in a slow round.

Don't you look
like a schnook
for you can see

that it took
your nainsooks
and with them me.
Nainsook derives from Hindi and means "eye's delight."

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4 Comments
  • Juliana

    Haha, that makes me happy :) That's awesome! I'm a little over 17K. I would love to read yours, but it might be a while before I have time; I'm currently working on projects for finals. My email is piano.voice6@gmail.com. I won't promise anything, but I'll try my best to read it!


    8 months ago
  • pencils.and.paper.roses

    Still really love this (3 In answer to your question, my book is currently sitting at about 25K words. Hopefully it'll get longer though!


    8 months ago
  • Juliana

    @Budding Mae Thank you so much!


    8 months ago
  • pencils.and.paper.roses

    I
    love
    this
    So much!! Your first stanza is super hooking and the last line is just perfect.
    Amazing job!


    8 months ago