Harlow

United States

A human that does stuff with words among other humans who do other stuff with words

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Sundew

April 9, 2019

The sun kissed the dew
on the soft morning grass.
I savored the flavor,
inhaling ever so slightly 
and letting the scent tickle my nose

The dew was golden and thick,
like honey or marmalade;
with each step
it carefully caressed the crevices
of my bare feet.

A bird perched on a birch tree 
above the dew-coated grass
and twittered softly. 
And the sun kissed the dew
on the soft morning grass

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2 Comments
  • Harlow

    Thanks! I’ll take your word for it. My bus passes quite a few strays :)


    over 1 year ago
  • asteria

    i love this!!! writing about anything that makes you feel is CRITICAL. write about those flowers, write about that moon, write about the fluffy cat you always see on your way to school, write whatever you need. & keep it up, friend :)


    over 1 year ago