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I love how this is formatted, and I think if it was written in an essay format then a lot of the sensory details that the reader feels or imagines a they are reading would get lost. I also think it's very clear that in this letter the writer has a love for the person they are writing to as well as trying to cover that up by making a joke out of it, and I think that too could be easily lost in an essay format.
I don't have any specific questions or suggestions on the piece because I think the way it is is truly amazing. I'm left with this fuzzy feeling of love after that just makes me want to hug the nearest person to me, but this isn't cringey love or overly romantic love, it's just really pleasant to read. If I had one question though it would be if the "dork" person actually said those things if they are a person in real life.
I just LOVE THIS SO MUCH. Whenever I'm feeling sad I'm going to read this and I know it will cheer me up. Looking forward to reading more of your writing! You are awesome.