Peer Review by Harlow (United States)

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where does healing begin?

By: asteria


i want to
vomit all this
& all these
& all this

i want to 
show you
e v e r y t h i n g
they ever
did to me.

but i don't know 
where to

so maybe this place
is as good
as any.


Peer Review

The understanding and relatability of the piece as well as the acceptance of the speaker at the end.

I would really like to see a follow up poem or story explaining what they did to the speaker, which I guess is you.

Reviewer Comments

I love this. It was great to read and it helped me say some things. Thank you.