Peer Review by Harlow (United States)

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where does healing begin?

By: asteria


FREE WRITING


i want to
vomit all this
anguish
& all these
words
& all this
burning.

i want to 
show you
e v e r y t h i n g
they ever
did to me.

but i don't know 
where to
begin.

so maybe this place
is as good
as any.
 

~asteria

Peer Review

The understanding and relatability of the piece as well as the acceptance of the speaker at the end.


I would really like to see a follow up poem or story explaining what they did to the speaker, which I guess is you.


Reviewer Comments

I love this. It was great to read and it helped me say some things. Thank you.