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Message to Readers
I would love a peer review on this piece! I want to be able to improve at this type of poetry.
Peer Review
The simplicity and realism. It was very enjoyable to read.
I would like to know more about Jersey. How is he like sans the piano?
Reviewer Comments
What a delightful poem! You are a talented writer!