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This took WAY too long to write out XD I guess that’s what I get for doing it on a phone, huh? Moral of the story is always be absolutely sure to save it before leaving the tab. *facepalm* XD
Anyway, what do you think? Does it seem boring? Confusing? Can you get an idea of what’s happening?
WOW! The countdown-title was really inviting: "3...2...1" leads me on with the actual countdown of months synthesizes the character traits of Janae.
Is Chapter 2 up on your feed? How did you come up with the inspiration of Janae?
Janae is a lovely character, in a lovely piece. Keep on writing!