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I loved the aspect of Greek mythology & the fiery emotion of the main character a ton. Vocabulary is excellent and the words well-placed :) Your descriptions are also awesome, very vivid and easy to picture :DD There seems to be a metaphor hidden in all of this too, and I love that :DD
Why was everybody trying to kill/destroy the character???? What did they do to deserve all that??????
Here's your first review; the others are on the way! :DD This piece is super awesome and I really love it!! :DDD Keep writing!!!!!!!!!