asteria

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don't settle for the mundane;

chaos is far more intriguing.

Message to Readers

i'm not sure about the title, but what do you think?

constructive criticism welcome :)

just a little longer

April 6, 2019

FREE WRITING

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i'm strumming the air guitar
and beating the invisible drums
and mouthing the ear-splitting lyrics
and
i want to bottle
this feeling,
this wild carelessness,
this thrumming power,
this reckless abandon.

i want to bottle
this feeling
and drown in it
when i have just one more paragraph.

i want to bottle
this feeling
and bathe in it
when i wonder if i'll ever get unstuck

i want to bottle
this feeling
and get drunk on it
when i'm moonlit, tear-stained, and broken.

i want to bottle 
this feeling
and be okay.
~asteria

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  • asteria

    thanks for letting me know :)


    8 months ago
  • pencils.and.paper.roses

    Hi! :) you expressed interest in a concept I’d posted under the title “STORY IDE, ANY THOUGHTS”, which I’ve just written the first chapter of. If you don’t have interest, feel free to ignore this. The link is below :)
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/110454/version/210302

    Also, I love this piece so much :) I totally relate to the feeling you’re writing about.


    8 months ago