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I was entranced in this beautiful writing. At the end, the perspectives all together made so aware of everything in my life, in the world. I felt like it was fate for me to read this piece.
NOTHING! I wouldn't change it for a thing. It is so nice and unique
"Hear my cry,
I am the mad black woman that everyone's talking about.
Gender and race trample over me like a tsunami.
Everyone can try to guess, but don't nobody know me. They call me ghetto, bald, ratchet, and ugly yet what they don't know is the beauty of my chocolate skin that turns gold in the sun
My rebellious hair that refuses to be chained down by the enslavement that gravity has tried to set upon it
Every kink, every curl lay imperfectly perfect on my crown fitted head.
My full lips that hold so many power-filled words and love-scented kisses
My defined curves that no one can resist. My attitude, my pride, my swag that only I can pull off.
So the next time you wanna call me hostile or angry, remember where I come from
The inner chambers of Africa's royalty. "
I LOVE ALL OF THAT STANZA! It was just so defying and a nice standpoint/perspective. It was very empowering to read (sorry that I copied/pasted the whole thing, I wanted to clarify:)
Keep on writing!
I honestly think that you are a fantastic writer and that you are a worthy candidate for the competition!