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The impression this poem has is powerful, it's a little bittersweet at the end
it's already well written!! for sensory detail i may add what the forest smells/looks like- and any memories the man had of the woman before she died but it is great and does not need any more adding on
All of them, pretty much, but the ending: "Even though they took different roads" had a powerful impact on me
It's amazing how you were able to fit a story in a poem, with natural rhymes and great descriptions, I know you'll do great :)
This was a really great poem!!