I am a human being.
So are you.
The beast inside me is sleeping, not dead.
Wake them at you own risk.
Written By: YetAnotherHuman
April 2, 2019
PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition 2019
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This is so pretty!!
The Bubbling Pen
wow - the rhythm and flow of this piece, demonstrating the vast violence and yet serene calm of the sea, I love it so much <3
Being a person of the sea, I find this very moving and I like it a lot. Congratulations!
okay. i. luv. this!! the imagery! the rhyming! it all comes together so well. the last stanza is so striking, and you *mastered* that ending rhyme. i also love how you were uniform with "wild be the waves," "howling be the wind," and "foamy be the waters." i cannot express my adoration enough.
just an overall brilliant execution, my friend :)
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