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The poem kind of plays with my concept of 'home'. To me this poem relates to my nature of never fitting in any situation, any group or just this place.
I feel like the starting line kind of caught me off. It could be replaced with something more relevant. And the way you have described pain is really beautiful, but it would help a lot if you could add in a few lines and be descriptive.
"I want to go home." Personally, this line holds a lot of different meanings and I can sense a feeling of detachment in this line. I feel like the poet is actually describing how this doesn't feel like home. Home is kind of a feeling, it's about people, its about emotions and atmosphere. Its not just about a certain place. And I love how the poet says that he/she wants to go home - which I suppose that person hasn't even felt but something tell her/him that it is definitely better than this.
The concept of this is amazing and I feel like a lot of people will connect to this. I really love how you have managed to take a common line's meaning to a whole different dimension and yet somehow not scripted a poem that's very hard to understand.