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I was utterly intrigued. The last line "I want to go home" left me wanting to know more of the speaker's story.
If you could add more vividness to your lines, interweave the physical aspect of falling from heaven with the emotional, and attach evocative bits of the speaker's "home", you could elevate your poem and make readers understand better and resonate with the story you're telling.
The last line's stunning and powerful. It has this sense of longing and poignancy that's equally enthralling and intriguing.
You have a great concept and I would love to see your poem flourish! You could also read other poems that bear similar idea and feeling. (I suggest this one https://allpoetry.com/poem/12515464-Wronged-by-Bosiar),
Good luck with the contest! I hope this peer review helps you!