Opal Drop

United States

A huge Harry Potter fan
mix of Gryffindor and Ravenclaw
I love to write, write, write
Again huge HP fan
I love fantasy,
Well, um, I'm 13. Not 14 yet....
Excited for high school, going to be there soon!

Message from Writer

Don't ever give up writing
Writing is a beautiful art, and if you're interested
don't give up
Every word
Every sentence
and Every story you write
creates something great for everyone to enjoy.
So please don't give up,
and take pride in your writing.


April 6, 2019

yet soothing..
Such is my sorrow
Such is my paradise

Liquid anarchy

Made from intricate petals of
the most fragrant rose. 
Fashioned from the glass
blown from the finest sands.
Adorned with the mystical
temptress of amethysts.
Buried inside is a spice
that blooms with flavor.

That strikes with malice.

An ephemera of sorts.

Not even the coarse sugars of Sheqer
Not even the rippling honey of Ezti
Can sweeten this torturous potion.

Still I am drawn to it.
Addicted to it.
This elixir is my haven.

Its warmth might smite me,
its effect birth hunger in me,
but it envelops me in fire.

As it courses through my blood,
as it sways my mind
as it takes control of me
as my heart forms to a swale..

I battle against its dominance.
I am ashamed by how 
vulnerable I am to it.

My body toys with me
hurling me into the abyss
and again.
It pulls my strings forcefully.
I am but a puppet to this elixir.

I am helpless.
I am coerced to succumb.

I am lit.
I am ablaze.
I am reborn.


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  • SeaOfWords

    Wow! Awesome!

    about 1 year ago
  • The Bubbling Pen

    Your piece is so powerful and intricate in its own way, making the reader wonder what your elixir is and how it has managed to manipulate your thoughts <3

    over 1 year ago