Peer Review by Vannah (United States)

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Me

By: Grazella


FREE WRITING

Sometimes i’m Scared to be me. 
With my books, 
And my looks, 
And the things I love to cook

then I look over at you 
with your styles
And your smiles, 
that cheer people up for miles

I wonder how you find the strength todo it.
how you find the strength to BE it? 

I’ve tried to be like you. 
it just made me feel blue. 
It was then that I knew:

Sometimes i’m Scared to be me,
But its me I need to be

 


Peer Review

I really love the rhythm of the poem, it's so cute.


Putting a space between "to" and "do" will make the piece stronger because you fixed grammatical errors.


Reviewer Comments

This poem is super cute and I think it's a really good message for younger kids, if you shared this with friends/family kids I think it'd be a cute lesson for them.