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Do you see me too?
This was delightful! It was so cute! i could really hear and feel the longing and grief in the writers voice, and that's what I liked most about it.
Feather is a person, correct? I feel like you could include a little more confirmation on that angle. Perhaps even a slight description of Feather or a memory as the writer is searching for them.
I loved the way you used your words to create a lovely dream-like and yet sad atmosphere. Well done!