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I'm super bad at grammar so if someone could help me on that I would really appreciate it. Does the bolded text thing make sense? Is it too distracting? Is there anything I can do to make the piece sound better overall? thank youu
I really like the simplicity of the piece. It's wonderfully straight to the point yet fills your heart in the best way.
I feel warm.
Mainly because those words seem to express exactly what I have felt in the past.
Good job bolding the most important words.