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I'm super bad at grammar so if someone could help me on that I would really appreciate it. Does the bolded text thing make sense? Is it too distracting? Is there anything I can do to make the piece sound better overall? thank youu

Only a Hundred Words

March 23, 2019

PROMPT: Tiny Love Story

I can only say one-hundred words... 
How can I describe my smile whenever I see your stupid face through the car window?
Or all of the times that you look at me and I feel heat seeping through my face, infecting every corner?
Maybe I can tell them about the time we looked at the stars, but all I could focus on was your voice filling the sky with lust and wonder.
Maybe I can say all the things that make you special (if only it was 1,000,000 instead)
Maybe... just maybe I can say,
I love you,

...I do.

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  • weirdo

    Oh, and welcome to WtW!

    over 1 year ago
  • weirdo

    This is amazing!
    Are you gonna enter it in Blotted Ink with a Broken Quill's contest?! I think you should!

    over 1 year ago
  • MimiChoudhury

    I love this....I really love this...:)

    over 1 year ago