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Lana-Rae

United States

Message to Readers

I would like to know what you think of my writing and what you understand it to mean. I also would like people to tell me what I can do better with this piece of writing.

Deal Me a Hangover

March 10, 2016

PROMPT: Flashlight

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A wild card in a deck of 53,
Suits and dresses to stand out
Amongst the faces.
Pleasure mingles with sweet Felicity,
Shyness is the elephant in the room.
Accept a drink as bubbly as the good spirits;
Recall rash resolutions resulting wrongly.
And... make more. 
Enter, Regret, the bouncer is preoccupied;
Snag an apple for that appetite. 
Patience has a story to tell.

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