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springtime

March 22, 2019

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march means mudslides
joyful heaps and cascading
filth; a wiry grin, nature's
smacking lips still
kissing, still salivating on the
midmorning marshes.
crystalline snowflakes,
woolen as whispers crack
under booted toes,
pink arms red from toothy
cold, fingers numb and noiseless
in gloves, but
the sun still shines.

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2 Comments
  • Harlow

    This is exactly why I both love and hate spring


    over 1 year ago
  • AbigailSauble

    Yes ...
    I love the run-on sentence feel and unique descriptions. =)


    over 1 year ago