don't settle for the mundane;
chaos is far more intriguing.
constructive criticism/comments welcome. any suggestions for better imagery?
thanks for visiting!
Written By: asteria
March 23, 2019
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thank youuu! means a lot!!!!
damn!!!!!!! this is so good!!!!!!!!! i could feel that in my gut!
I love your descriptions!
idk paperbird, but i'll take the compliment :)
i guess i do have a tip, though. use nouns to describe other nouns in an unconventional way. it doesn't work for everything, but for example: "pomegranate lips" and "rosebush hands." ummmm another one: "honeycomb hair." also, alliteration is GOLDEN.
how are you so good
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