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don't settle for the mundane;

chaos is far more intriguing.

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constructive criticism/comments welcome. any suggestions for better imagery?
thanks for visiting!

don't touch a monster you won't love

March 23, 2019



they warned him of her
and those
rosebush hands,
and those
moonlight eyes,
and those
swaying hips.

they warned him of her
and everything
she touched,
and everything
that made her smile.

and they say he once wondered
what could make her so
and those
pomegranate lips.

but i think he liked the ignorance.

why else would he
bare his neck to me
and my
bloodied fangs?


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  • r|A|i|N

    holy hell

    over 2 years ago
  • asteria

    thank youuu! means a lot!!!!

    over 2 years ago
  • Julius Caesar

    damn!!!!!!! this is so good!!!!!!!!! i could feel that in my gut!

    over 2 years ago
  • asteria

    thank you!

    over 2 years ago
  • Onion3102

    I love your descriptions!

    over 2 years ago
  • asteria

    idk paperbird, but i'll take the compliment :)

    i guess i do have a tip, though. use nouns to describe other nouns in an unconventional way. it doesn't work for everything, but for example: "pomegranate lips" and "rosebush hands." ummmm another one: "honeycomb hair." also, alliteration is GOLDEN.

    over 2 years ago
  • paperbird

    how are you so good

    over 2 years ago