Peer Review by Suri Purefoy (United States of America)()

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She

By: erinsheckard38


PROMPT: Quartet

She was absolutely everything, a spitfire tongue, quick as lightning, sharp enough to cut you with a single word. She was a girl with enough sarcasm to fill an entire room. She was bright an bold, unafraid of being such. She was everything, and she was dying.


Peer Review

Everything in your piece explains something, but I think I really like the "she was a girl with enough sarcasm to fill an entire room". It portrayed a special sense of her and made me think when I read it.


How long does she have?


Reviewer Comments

This is a wonderful piece filled with emotion and beauty.