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Lorelei.Castle

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Message to Readers

Hi everyone! This is my first short story and I would really appreciate some constructive criticism :)

Remember

March 19, 2019

PROMPT: Tiny Love Story

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It was a warm and sunny Saturday.  We were hand in hand, walking down the cobblestone path for our anniversary.  Everything was perfect.  She was perfect.

" Remember when we first met?" she asked me, smiling.

"Of course I remember.  It was the day that changed my whole life".

And I did remember.  I remember her so distinctly.  I remember the way her dark hair swirled around her wrist.  I remember how she sang with such joy.  I remember her chocolate brown eyes, glinting with liveliness.
  
I remember. 

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