.audrey michelle.
United States
.hi.
.im audrey.
.writing.
.reading.
.volleyball.
.art.
.i stand by the cold is better than the hear :D.
.chat if ur bored... idk... im bored!!!!.
Message to Readers
i wish i could feel this w a guy but im still single D:
and this sucks lol.. i had 2 do something
8 Comments
Quille
Um, I don't know when you'll be back, but I'm leaving the site, so I probably won't be here. I've got a pile of reviews to do, so I'll be here for at least another week or so...
:( I'm going to miss you a ton!
Good luck with your contest & keep writing!!!! Aight :)
xxxx Quille
.audrey michelle.
tysm!
2A,2H and 1D
Niccceee!!
Christy Wisdom
Hi audrey! I've written another poem :)
Jae
i really like this! i get the mood and tone and stuff, but what situation is it really talking about? true story, or someone you know, or what?
written really well! :D
Quille
Totally welcome :)
Do you think you could check out my latest piece, Tidbit? It's an excerpt from my novel and I would really love to know what you think of it :)
.audrey michelle.
aw ty
Quille
I love how you rhymed the first two lines; heart/piercing dart. And then the last stanza all rhymes together perfectly :DD (love the use of the word lil :DDDD
Awesome poem!! :DDD