.audrey michelle.

United States of America

.hi.
.im audrey.
.writing.
.reading.
.volleyball.
.art.
.i stand by the cold is better than the hear :D.
.chat if ur bored... idk... im bored!!!!.

Message to Readers

i wish i could feel this w a guy but im still single D:

and this sucks lol.. i had 2 do something

touch

March 26, 2019

FREE WRITING

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you touch my heart,
softly, though, not like a piercing dart.
your fingers inside me,
give me a feeling in my knees.

just a lil thank you
to you,
my one and only
who loves me boldly.

your touch
i must clutch
oh so much
and i will do as such.


 

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8 Comments
  • Quille

    Um, I don't know when you'll be back, but I'm leaving the site, so I probably won't be here. I've got a pile of reviews to do, so I'll be here for at least another week or so...
    :( I'm going to miss you a ton!
    Good luck with your contest & keep writing!!!! Aight :)
    xxxx Quille


    8 months ago
  • .audrey michelle.

    tysm!


    8 months ago
  • 2A,2H and 1D

    Niccceee!!


    8 months ago
  • Christy Wisdom

    Hi audrey! I've written another poem :)


    9 months ago
  • Jae

    i really like this! i get the mood and tone and stuff, but what situation is it really talking about? true story, or someone you know, or what?
    written really well! :D


    9 months ago
  • Quille

    Totally welcome :)
    Do you think you could check out my latest piece, Tidbit? It's an excerpt from my novel and I would really love to know what you think of it :)


    9 months ago
  • .audrey michelle.

    aw ty


    9 months ago
  • Quille

    I love how you rhymed the first two lines; heart/piercing dart. And then the last stanza all rhymes together perfectly :DD (love the use of the word lil :DDDD
    Awesome poem!! :DDD


    9 months ago