Opal Drop

United States

A huge Harry Potter fan
mix of Gryffindor and Ravenclaw
I love to write, write, write
Again huge HP fan
I love fantasy,
Well, um, I'm 13. Not 14 yet....
Excited for high school, going to be there soon!

Message to Readers

Sorry if I made you cry..

Grief #ForgivenessFGE

March 21, 2019


i remember when you held my small hand
i remember when you took me around the park
you held me tight
you loved me so
you never had the heart to say no
to me

when most would have been ashamed
you were proud
when most would have shunned
you embraced
when most would have rejected
you welcomed

that was you mama
that was you
a mental child
with dyslexia and cancer
who couldn't even properly walk at the age of 8
would have been repudiated by all other mothers

but you...
don't you see
any mother would have given me up for adoption
Who wants a child who is disabled and ill and 
only you saw beyond that 
only you saw the true me

don't cry
forgive me mama
forgive me
i couldn't fight off the cancer
but i know you can fight off the grief
cancer got the best of me
but don't you dare let grief ruin your life

be happy 

forgive me for leaving you
forgive me please i beg you
because even though I'm not by your side
holding your hand
i will forever live inside your tender heart

you have to move on
you have to forgive me
because only then can you live the rest of your long life
in peace
only then will i also
rest in peace
RIP darling girl..
I hope I didn't break your hearts, or make you cry, if you weren't in the mood for it.

If you were, then, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
If you hated the piece, I am sorry for your eyes.


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  • .audrey michelle.

    im going to cry! this.. oh my goodness! this was hella beautiful, passionate, and emotional. i absolutely loved how you poured your heart into this piece! i'm still ab to cry!!!

    over 2 years ago
  • pieridae!

    I... I just... My heart... *Insert words here* WOW! I'm gonna go curl up in a ball in the corner and sob now, thank you very much. Just the way you wrote this was so touching and heartbreaking and beautiful and cancer freaking sucks and UGH. This is seriously incredible.

    over 2 years ago
  • spearmint

    This was so touching and beutiful. And the way you avoided proper punctuation and capitalization to add to the effect of dyslexia was just amazing. Good luck!!

    over 2 years ago
  • nevaredhp

    Oh no! I wasn't expecting that, but I love it. You did a great job of telling the story while also bringing a lot of emotion into it.

    over 2 years ago
  • VrishiFishi

    That was so touching. I could almost feel what the narator was feeling. I absolutely loved this piece

    over 2 years ago