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Bailee

Australia

You may be wondering what makes me different from you or the person in the corner? Well not a lot really, I write on here, on Wattpad, and singing is my life. I'm striving to one day perform on Broadway... hopefully. I honestly just love feedback!

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Hey everyone! I would really appreciate some constructive criticism. I struggle a lot with grammar. I would love to gain feedback about how I could improve this... thanks! From a girl you don't know!

The Bird

March 19, 2019

PROMPT: Tiny Love Story

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SQUARK!

Trills of whistle's and tweets erupt from his beak, his head rasied to the sky, neck protruding. The closer I approach the more he his puffs feathers. He runs back and forth, frantic, wide-eyed and his wings in a shamble. Between my fingers I hold his one true love.

"Is this what you want?"

CHIRP!

"I could give it to you."

CHIRP SQUARK!

I watch this small feathered creature run aimlessly. The squarks are so loud and continous that I give in.

"Alright."

No one has ever loved me as much as that bird loved that spinach. 

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