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Message to Readers

okay this happened freshman year and i wasn't actually that disturbed by it but dissociation makesme think about bones and organs and internal emptiness and those things made me think of this, so. here it is. hella wack and not my usual style

in biology we dissected a pig and i saw myself in its gut

December 12, 2019


spread open so wide its vulnerability
split my heart, too. legs bound, dripping
with formaldehyde. 
squeeze it, says my lab partner, gloved fingers
wrapped around the stomach, so i do. 
its spleen flops uselessly. we jab at it. 
let's name her juliet, says my lab partner,
and pokes a hole through juliet's kidney. 
we broke juliet's rib cage to reach that kidney;
i snapped soft bone to reach that kidney. 

i wonder if i could snap my own rib cage. 


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  • poetri

    um um um um i...can't function...around your perfection it's insane
    "i wonder if i could snap my own rib cage." made me want to go absolutely feral. killer line. i mean, it almost killed me. i mean, um, i just really fucking liked this ok and i don't have words because of it.
    so thank you for writing this, dear <3

    7 months ago
  • jun lei just something someone had to say about how beautiful this poem is

    10 months ago
  • acrosstheskysky

    hello i am temporarily back (i think my account's going to be disabled in two months for some reason) and i read this and!!!!!!! this is absolutely amazing. utterly incredible. the pig dissection lab experience and i'm very impressed by how you wrote about it!!!

    12 months ago
  • Anha

    why don't you do those trivial things like contests or q&a's or rants?? anyway, here's wonderwall.

    almost 1 year ago
  • FizzyBaguette

    I think rainandsonder captures exactly what I was going to say. You convey such a powerful message within such a short text. This is amazing!

    about 1 year ago
  • rainandsonder

    there's something so simple and yet disturbing about this-- or i guess disturbing isn't quite the right word, because in the moment that isn't really what the narrator is feeling. the narrator seems more detached, too disassociated to be chilled or horrified, and there's something about the combination of that and how methodical and factual the piece is up until the last line that makes the reader uneasy or shocked. there's something to be said too about giving the creature that you're dissecting a name, humanizing it as you tear it apart, but i don't have enough brain power right now to go into that. anyway, fantastic work!

    about 1 year ago
  • Dmoral

    you seem very popular here on wtw, and i can see why!
    there's a sort of power you have withing pieces like this. you seem to keep things short and compact, but its everything and nothing all at once. the way you ended this left me thinking. i'm definitely looking at more of your writing

    about 1 year ago
  • elisa

    this is absolutely incredible

    about 1 year ago
  • ajamwal

    hmm, this is different, but i like it. also, you saw my prompt, and you liked it! that you so much, this really means a lot! !happy writing!

    about 1 year ago
  • r|A|i|N
    i guess it's just fun to write about pulling apart corpses? hella disturbing too

    about 1 year ago
  • r|A|i|N

    holy fuck i can relate to this so hard. last year i dissected a sheep brain and it bothered me so much and i wrote a poem just like this on wtw. the formaldehyde imagery, the stabbing, it's like all coming back to me omg

    about 1 year ago
  • Upsidownpenguin

    very interesting, to say the least, sappho. Your obsession with bones is getting exciting

    about 1 year ago
  • Tushar Mandhan

    As a medical student, I loved it! Dissections are scary but at the same time exciting.

    about 1 year ago
  • Lottifus

    I remember these days. My friend cut off the vena cava and put his finger through it and ran around waving his hand at everyone screaming 'LOOK AT MY RING'. Good times.

    about 1 year ago
  • jaii

    well this is definitely... what's the word? um, interesting. yea let's go with interesting.

    rib cages are nice.

    about 1 year ago