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Message to Readers
My life has changed so much since I first started writing. Sometimes I want to give up. Anyone else?
I know it's not one line, but; "My lucky charm A turtle necklace that sits in my guitar case From my best friend Who always called me Turtle" Really beautiful!
Happiness tinged with a tad of sad. Yearning.
No questions. Just a statement: You are AMAZING at this!
Truly beautiful! You a very talented writer that I hope to continue reading from. Keep going—never give up!