these are my letters
Comment how you think I should end this poem using a couplet.
Written By: Oscar_Locke
March 16, 2019
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ok thanks; i’ll review asap
Thanks, @paperbird! I love the ocean draining away, maybe coupled with a lightning strike. I didn't go into this with a meter in mind. And thank you for the potential review!!
it’s always unfair—your writing is so good but no one ever comments on it.
to respond to your message from writer: if you want to only use two lines, you could easily do a simple form of symbolism—perhaps compare the speaker to a bird folding its wings or an ocean draining away. but you’re also about a hundred percent better at this form of poetry so you might have a better idea.
i think i’m going to review this. before i critique—is there any particular meter you’re following that i should be aware of?
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