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"Read this, please? It's amazing!"
Your words. The language you used is precise and flowing, steady and graceful. I like how you used bigger words and phrases, adding a great strength to the piece.
I thought all of it was really good—you got the point out there and across, and made me think about the topic for a moment.
You did a really, really fantastic job writing this! It's a beautiful, truth-telling piece that touched me. Thank you for writing this!