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fevek12

United States

House M.D. is my thing. I like Star Wars. The Fault in Our Stars...ugh.

Message to Readers

The feedback that I would like on this poem is ways that I can improve it. Since it's a reverse poem and it has to be able to be read both ways, I need to know if I should make it longer or if I should just keep it simple. Thanks!

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March 5, 2015

PROMPT: Where Were You?

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Where were you?

When my heart hurt,

I wasn't me.

I would thrash around,

I would hurt other people,

Because you hurt me.

I thought you would save me

In the blink of an eye.

My world was turned upside down

When I finally gave up on you

Where were you?

 

This is a reverse poem. It can be read both ways (up and down).

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