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Hi loves! This is my first time publishing my work - in fact, I've only ever written a handful of pieces. I would really appreciate any feedback and/or criticism that you have, and thank you in advance!
It was the topic that you were writing about that drew me in.
The writer believes that the gender wage gap shouldn't exist and that it should be made equal.
It was the part where the writer started talking about how women earning less money could ruin their livelihood.
No, I love it the way it is
Keep on writer, you clearly have a great talent for this
I love it!!! You go for it and make your voice be heard for what you believe. I comletely agree with every word you said.