Peer Review by annacatherine (Australia)

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Yellow Bruises

By: Bi


FREE WRITING

Her limbs grew in a yellow hue 
No longer pose in purple grace 
   
   Another week without you

The yellow stains in her leg
Come to fight the purple dread
With the small reminder that love
Is more than being a stained rag

   Has it really been a week?



 


Peer Review

I love the message behind the poem. It's wonderfully written with the use of imagery and internal thoughts.


I would love extra parts to this poem. Maybe a poem from before and afterwards? It could be a series :)


Reviewer Comments

Keep writing! Poetry is really hard to get right and you're managing to do some really good work. Just keep channelling your emotions to write and you'll get so much better!!