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It gives a sense of something. I can't put a finger on it, but it adds something special to the piece.
I think I want to know more about 1. "For the one who always tried to break it//it ended in a nasty row." what is this person trying to break?
The piece as a whole is beautiful. The details in parenthesis are an incredible addition in my opinion. This is really good. Keep working :]