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hey, i'm Jo.
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i love so many things,
forest colors
navy blue
writing
music
sisters
sun yellow
caramel and vanilla in my coffee
chocolate covered berries
feeling pretty
wanting to find the right guy

love you guys...

Message to Readers

I edited original entry again and hope this is better!

speak #onlyonehundred (EDITED)

March 14, 2019

FREE WRITING

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Every day I feel the count-down press
“go”.

        Somewhere              100
Must be blinking,  w a i t i n g for
    words.

My mouth becomes a
palace,
    like a prison,
every meal made of speech.

Every letter becomes so
                v
                a
                l
                u
                a
                b
                l
                e
when-vines-start-climbing-in-my-head-and-chains-begin-to-wrap-around-my-wrists-while-I-sit-stick-straight-on-a-burning-throne-for-fear-of-using-up-my-little-bit-of-life-every-day.

I feel time start to d
                             r
                             i
                             p
                                 out
w i t h  b l o o d  f r o m  m y  t o n g u e.

It soaks the cloth over my
cra
            cki
                        ng
lips,
the only relief I get is to say one--
                                                more--
wor
Okay, so this is for the contest by Blotted Ink with a Broken Quill, and I wrote it to be about someone who can only communicate 100 words a day. Every word they say takes another off the count-down, and no one knows why it happens. Therefore, I used only 100 words to write this piece. Please leave your thoughts, and thank you for reading!

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4 Comments
  • BrokenSmile

    I love your formatting so much! I like your poetry style, it very interesting.


    8 months ago
  • buddingauthor

    Wow this is so beautiful and you have used the prompt so wisely! Awesome!


    9 months ago
  • bride124

    Very goring in my opinion but also very full of expression! Great job!


    9 months ago
  • Blotted Ink with a Broken Quill

    Wow! I really like this one, and think it much better fits the prompt. Thank you!


    9 months ago