Yosemite 6

Christy Wisdom

United States

Hello people! What to say? I'm a Christian girl. I like to write. I write tons of poetry, some short stories, and other things.
I like
NARUTO
Imagine Dragons
LOTR
Harry Potter
Agents of SHIELD
Artemis Fowl
My Hero Academia
God bless you!

Message from Writer

There is no happiness like that of being loved by your fellow-creatures, and feeling that your presence is an addition to their comfort. - Jane Eyre

Not all those who wander are lost. - Lord of the Rings

I have come home at last! This is my real country! I belong here. This is the land I have been looking for all my life, though I never knew it till now. -C.S. Lewis, The Last Battle

Things to know about me
1. I'm a Christian.
2. I'm Pro-life.
3. I do not put any swearing (oh my gosh included) into any of my stories.
4. I will not put any sex or nudity into my stories.
Thank you to all who have supported me, and feedback is always welcome!
Also, if you comment on a piece of mine, I will generally respond to it at some point.

nostalgia and tears

March 12, 2019

FREE WRITING

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i remember that day we sat
back against back
under that tree
the light was streaming
through the leaves
dappling us in patches of
light

we were so happy
peace was in reach
just for that moment
it's hard to find it
these days

we laughed and 
talked
mentor and apprentice
you told me
i could do great things
one day

do you
remember that
too?

i miss that 
moment
we shared

now i sit alone
and though the sunlight
creeps through the leaves
everything seems 
so 
dim

it's as if
i've forgotten
what it
means
to be happy
now that you're gone

and i cry
because this is not how it was
meant to be
i should not be alone here
and you should not be dead

will you watch over me?
will you look down on me
from wherever you are
and say to my parents up there
that i was a good student
that i will do great things

i wonder
can you even
see
me 
or have you gone
too far
away?

i miss you
so
much
it's almost unbearable
you
though you were
only
my mentor
seemed to me
like the grandfather i never
had

but you've left me
with only memories
departed from this world
just like the parents i never
knew

now i sit here
under this tree
remembering you, and
begging
you
to come back

but i've lost you
and i don't think
you'll
ever
find your way
home 
again. 


 
This is basically a poem describing a scene from Naruto Shippuden 
https://www.reddit.com/r/Naruto/comments/4s4kiq/naruto_jiraiya_enjoying_popsicle_sticks_under_a/
and then this artwork that is not from the anime but fits well with what i wrote above. 
https://www.google.com/search?q=jiraiya+and+naruto+under+the+tree&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwj8jsLz0fzgAhWul-AKHd0fDgAQ_AUIDigB&biw=1280&bih=881#imgrc=Os-WWWeUwRILEM:

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6 Comments
  • Christy Wisdom

    My pleasure!! :DDD


    7 months ago
  • Quille

    Thanks :DD I really appreciate it!!
    LO-OJ
    :DDD


    7 months ago
  • Christy Wisdom

    Sure!!


    7 months ago
  • Quille

    Anytime :DDD
    BTW, do you think maybe you could check out my latest poem and let me know what you think?
    I would really appreciate it :)


    7 months ago
  • Christy Wisdom

    Aw, thanks!! You too :D


    7 months ago
  • Quille

    WOW!!! (sorry if I sound like I'm lacking a more original phrase to use, this just makes me think Wow! :D I love this (and still lack Naruto knowledge, so this also gives me a bit more on that :) The title is wonderful, btw :DD
    You're an awesome poet & could have quite a career writing :DDD


    7 months ago