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Message to Readers
based off a painting i saw once
PLEASE COMMENT; LIKES TELL THE POET NOTHING. if you have any criticism, please deliver––this is draft ii and i am always eager to improve.
update: sorry sorry sorry i haven't been writing as much; i'm on vacation
I really love the way you've written poetry filled with imagery that's really appealing to listen to. I love biology and this poem filled my senses and made me happy :) I especially liked the first two lines and the last five lines of this poem. I felt like they were written really well and created an amazing mood for your poetry.
This poem is amazing - I don't have any ideas for you to improve on.
I really love reading your poetry because it's so lovely to read. I would really like for you to do more poems like this!!!