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This piece reminded me to spend time on things that will matter the most in the long run. You wrote the words "so much you wanted to do with them but will never get the chance to." And I think we all need to remember that time is not reusable. It happens like that then it's gone and there is no way to get it back.
I really love this peace and I feel that you gave the perfect amount of information to us. We don't need to know who your grieving about nor do we need to know what happened to that person. All we needed was the feeling the narrator has because of the event that took place. Well written this is powerful and beautiful at the same time.
I love the way you said everything this is great!