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Please write a peer review if you can. I really would love some feedback. If you write a peer review for me I will do one for your submission as well!
The opening sentence hooked me in.
The writer is raising awareness for what the author is calling “The Adoption Crisis”.
The emotions in this essay are raw, and definatly the most compelling.
Maybe tell us readers how we can help with this crisis?
Keep at it! This is coming along fabulously!
I like it.