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I love the way you pointed out that he was buried with a sword and shield above him. The love and understanding that the sister shows is really touching and moving.
Maybe just maybe hint on what he did as a warrior. But even then sometimes its best to keep somethings a secret and let them wonder.
I think that it was important that you mentioned that he wanted to stop the war. That itself tells you so much more about the brother and who he really was as a person.