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I like that you started out with the definition of feminism.
The suppression of boy is what leads to the objectification and weakness of others.
I like the use of real life situations. We all see it happening.
Add something about boys not being permitted by society to show emotion.
This is good. Just try and use a little bit more fact and a little less opinion.