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I was crying while writing this. I hope you all find friends like @acrosstheskysky. And @acrosstheskysky, thank you so much.
P.S next week is the ides of March :D
You have a very strong and emotional opening to this narrative. It makes the reader want to learn more about the relationship between you and acrossthesky.
Nothing more needed. I think the relationship between the writer and friend was covered beautifully and in great detail.
You seem to switch pov between the first and second paragraphs and the rest of the essay. Sometimes you refer to acrossthesky as "her" and "she" sometimes as "you"
Otherwise, great essay!