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I love your mother's story. It really shows how brave she is and strong! I love how she spent "countless nights studying and learning to make enough money to better her family's life," so moving and inspiration for women around the world.
I always like the pieces I read to be full of imagery maybe describe what your mother looks like. Your piece really lets the reader know who your mother is personality wise which is the most important but to add that physical imagery might push your writing to the next level.
Keep up the good work you have a beautiful writing voice!