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Bi

Portugal

I’m trying to increase my writting and decrease my stupidity.

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I make a lot of spelling mistakes and I’m trying to create poems that don’t sound like random words put together, so if you have any feedback I would love to hear it!

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March 8, 2019

FREE WRITING

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The screaming dribbles on your toes
Are vales of stolen breaths and brittle nails
My dear,
I’ve been writting on your skin,
Sad tales dipped in grim.

In the footnotes of your pulls I left a push.
It was never read,
So I
Stopped drawing helpless cursive
Onto your awaiting hand
 

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3 Comments
  • asteria

    wow, i am astounded by the wordplay here! brilliant piece :)


    4 months ago
  • Bi

    Thank you so much!


    5 months ago
  • Quille

    Wow. Absolutely wow. "Sad tales dipped in grim" and "vales of stolen breaths" are probably my favorite lines, but the whole thing is gorgeous :DD Fantastically wow. I'm literally at a loss for words :)


    5 months ago