Peer Review by Suri Purefoy (United States)

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By: LArmstrong


PROMPT: Quartet

He doodled on paper napkins, built skyscrapers from straws, protected the world with a battered guitar, and ate olives every day.


Message to Readers

Any feedback is welcomed!


Peer Review

I really love the first of the four sentences the most: "He doodled on paper napkins". Second favorite would have to be the last: "and ate olives every day". Unique and a bit odd, but a great detail that brings the character to life!


Is there a significance of him eating olives every day?


Reviewer Comments

Oh yes. This is good.
I really love how you took on the challenge of this prompt and brought your character to life! The four details you chose to tell are simply marvelous! They told about him, but still left spots unexplored and questions to be sought! Amazing job!